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Amor
Que te nace el amor, te nace todo
Con el suave batir de la pollera.
Que la amapola fresca que te adorna
Te embriague en eternas primaveras.
Que te nace la vida, nace toda
Con la pollera baja y a escondidas.
Que una noche de amor y suave luna
Te ha dejado tu vientre con fortuna.
Que te nació el amor, te nació todo
Después de engendrar las nueve lunas.
Y la pollera sirve como manta
Para tapar con ella las dos cunas.
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Text added on 06-12-2005, 57 hits. (1 vote)
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2005-12-08 21:28:20 |
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Hey!!! Gaius, think again what youre saying, youre mixing up things and I hate to say I disagree with you.
The objective of this web is to spread english writings amongst the people who can read them and if users start flooding this page with spanish texts Itll loose its original goal (look at how many poems people have uploaded since SIBELU´S waterfall of writings. I dont deny that maybe if she posted in "loscuentos" you wouldve never seen it but you cant use it as an excuse to ruin the page's goal. bmfy_alexhans |
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2005-12-07 16:58:14 |
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Sorry Almana, but I beg to differ.
This poem, and three of the other form Sibelu would have gone to complete waste on the Spanish side.
Only a few of the readers over there know how to read, understand and appreciate real poetry.
If Sibelu had posted them in the Spanish side I would have missed them, lost among all the seudo-poetry free verse garbage that constitutes 90% of the content there.
I'd rather have them here, in the English side, where I can enjoy and appreciate them, than in the Spanish side, where nobody gives a hoot about rhyme and rythm.
But I would surely like to know if Sibelu understands English so I can tell her why I liked some of her poems so much. GAIUS |
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2005-12-07 03:44:44 |
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ESTA LINDO
PERO AQUI ES EN INGLES, IM SORRY AMIGUITA!! almana |
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