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Home / Local Writers / bmfy_alexhans / Drawing - [C:120] 

Oh I wish I could draw you,
Not failing each time I try,
To resemble the traits of your face,
And so have them to die.
Why do I take you away,
Oh soon should be the day,
When I wish you hadnt held your sway,
And for your return, pray.
Could I have your smile,
To watch the sunshine in your face,
Could I draw your eyes,
And see the sunset everyday.
Knowing Im gonna loose you,
Knowing youll go away,
I would like to have your picture,
To remember how I failed.

Text added on 06-12-2005, 63 hits. (3 votes)


Readers opinions:
2008-01-08 22:20:53 very nice...romantic...nostalgic...lost love...nothing u can do...don´t u just hate it n love it at the same time? ckpreciosa
2005-12-09 00:39:50 About your comment to my posting about the Spanish poems posted by Sibelu, there is nothing for me to get angry about. It is your opinion, and I respect it. Plus you are right. It was an emotional note. Every once in a while I afford myself the luxury of voicing my opinions from the heart, even if my mind tells me I am wrong. I understand quite well that allowing a good poet to post in Spanish here would open the door for the bad ones to have access too. What I don't understand is why Sibelu would write her information in Spanish, not in English. If she came to this side of loscuentos to improve her English, I am sure everybody will welcome here. If not, she should stay on the Spanish only side. GAIUS
2005-12-09 00:29:54 Count me too. I like it lot. My stars and my vote. You deserve it. Thanks a lot. GAIUS
2005-12-07 03:46:10 I love it... it's really precious... I give u my *, all and nothing, It's what I have :) almana
 
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