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Home / Local Writers / Lady_Ligeia / That Night - [C:166] 
You went away.
You took my heart.
I drop a tear,
And die that night.
You left me in the dark.
You burned me to dust.
I bleeded so much.
And die that night.
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Text added on 20-03-2006, 59 hits. (3 votes)
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2006-11-10 11:08:14 |
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good, it sounds like my poems sometimes Kari_ufo |
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2006-04-05 01:01:11 |
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Oh... so sad. As diamond says, simple but deep. You can transmit by this poem that awful feeling that usually rounds by humans... Congratulations for so good poem. ***** Hermeset |
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2006-04-01 01:02:08 |
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simple, but very deep,it made me remember to sth,it´s sad but true.i liked it. diamond |
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2006-03-26 23:40:17 |
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Interesting, when someone leave, it always pain… but I think you cuold do it better… **** four starts amethyst |
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