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I know, I don't have any chance to make you mine, dreaming about you every night, thinking how far you are.. But suddenly I recognize your voice, between the light and dark.. You're not so far, I can reach your face, life then have some sense..
How can I freeze this moment? how can I feel you closer?
I found a miracle and now I'm losing, the magic behind your eyes, the hope to be by your side.. the consequence brought by a lie.. maybe now there's more miles between you and I... |
Text added on 07-05-2006, 66 hits. (2 votes)
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2006-11-10 11:03:16 |
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nice Kari_ufo |
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2006-06-16 18:48:20 |
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Well, I think that this Story has some elements importants which make interesant, for example, the adjetives, the words, but the most important, the combination between both. Colombianwriter |
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2006-05-19 09:45:03 |
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Very nice story. MargaCarmen |
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