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Home / Local Writers / walker / Forever tonight - [C:202] 

The never-ending
goodbye
to the perfect
moment
to the perfect
night
in the midst of
all imperfections,
the seemingly
endless
inner
rhythm
to our bodies,
our souls,
together

I don’t want
this night
to end
I just wish it’d last
forever
I don’t want
the stars
to fade
I just wish
they’d shine
forever

© Eytán Lasca, 2006

Text added on 08-07-2006, 108 hits. (1 vote)


Readers opinions:
2006-08-28 22:30:07 is the best... congratulations mardeph
2006-07-14 02:44:40 Simple, but it expresses everything you wanted to. Five stars. =) Hermeset
 
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