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Im drunk in my desire..
But look the way you smile at me
and the way your hands reach out
and the way you hold me near.
Ive seen you in my dreams
and felt your heart in mine.
Ive seen the way you move
and that keeps me looking at you
I could never leave you
even if you ask me to.
I could never love you more
more than I already do.
Please believe that I try,
I try my best to forget you.
I didnt mean to fall in love
its my fault to feel this way.
Please remember when you loved me.
Then you left me.
so I waited...
and finally
I said...
I said goodbye, but I dont mean it.
Cause i cant get out of my mind
so please
go away
go away..
I could never leave you
even if you ask me too
I could never love you more
more than i already do
more than i already do.
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Text added on 07-12-2006, 92 hits. (5 votes)
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2007-11-06 22:04:45 |
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it`s so sad and an awful feeling not to intend to love and then do it...specially if its`s a forbidden or impossible love! regarding the grammar mistakes walker n rofo mention...it IS possible to say that way...if u meant that u regret NOW what u said before, and the "get out"...well, who do u want out of u? urself or him? it could be either! ckpreciosa |
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2007-11-01 02:26:15 |
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same grammatical comment as rofo but other than that a great poem ***** walker |
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2007-09-11 22:00:38 |
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I think you made a mistake here: "I dont mean it.
Cause i cant get out of my mind"
Isn't it supposed to be "didn't" instead of dont and "get you out" instead of get out?
Anyway, I really loved your poem I think you put a lot of emotion in it that is really sensed when read. Congrats! =) rofo |
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2007-01-18 12:47:57 |
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Beautiful text of love, I congratulate you. joaqledo1 |
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2006-12-19 16:09:45 |
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It's always possible to love a little more than we already do, but not in your case... Sad, but really touching. leily |
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