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Home / Local Writers / Muertelenta / Suicide - [C:226] 

I drink of the glass
the contained poison
that it is diluted between my veins…
my blood boils like fire
and my stiff tongue
no longer it can name you…
the light begins to close itself
and still I continue seeing your damn face…


Text added on 09-12-2006, 136 hits. (7 votes)


Readers opinions:
2007-11-22 21:18:45 Oh, my god. chorizoinsalchicha
2007-11-06 22:00:32 sometimes death is not the ultimate scape!....a terrible but true thought! short but good one! ckpreciosa
2007-11-01 02:23:58 So intense. Hey... I've been there. ***** walker
2007-01-18 12:35:59 Why if his face seems to you to be damned do you commit suicide for him? Very good the text. joaqledo1
2006-12-19 16:10:48 A little crazy, but I think I like it... leily
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