Indeed nice night
I admit
¡That moon
upon our heads! ¡The shining!
No offense but
as it lacks something
I don't know what it could be
...it's just that, mmm,
I feel it kind of empty...
maybe it would be perfect with
two moons. ¡Yeah!. Two moons in the same night.
Don´t bother, it's just my opinion,
I know that you are the author
it's your night, but sometimes
is good take into account the views of the user.