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Home / Local Writers / little_kafka / Broken wine bottles make perfect dildos - [C:358] 

She wasn't productive anymore. And love was more about conformity than sincerity. The days were deadly fumes floating around the ambience. Rotten meat, a familiar stench. Violet clouds wrapped with green velvet. Pills, pills, pills and more pills to cure what the other pills did. She hit her head many times before and the marks on her wrists looked like lil' highways going nowhere. Pills, pills, pills. Few stabs here and there. Bruises covering the naked beauty. She had to be strangled and cut wide open, so he could finally orgasm. The cops never understood how that bottle of wine was inside her rectum. Anyway, despite it all, the priest said she was in Heaven. The end.

Text added on 28-03-2009, 18 hits. (2 votes)


Readers opinions:
2009-04-01 21:47:27 can I be honest? I guess we all can. Honestly, when I started to read it I thought something powerfull was comming on the lines. Stronger I mean. Such storie like this, in my opinion, can be explosive if you find the rights words to mix with it. I see that potencial in it, that's what I'm really saying. nanahuatli
 
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