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Home / Local Writers / maxwell / My first ever try to write a poem in english - [C:57] 

Roses are red
violets blue
sugar... hmmm... sugar...

sugar... oh honey honey...

hmmm

What the hell. I love you.

Text added on 02-11-2005, 82 hits. (7 votes)


Readers opinions:
2007-11-13 08:37:00 It's wonderful! You kept it so simple that may seem fool... But it's just brilliant! My * and best wishes =) rofo
2006-06-28 06:21:36 hahahahaha It's so stupid, but... 2 knw, something stupid, will be great, sometimes! 5* c_posada
2005-11-25 18:09:11 Absolutely Brilliant! What a genius! - Are you going to post any more work?? Alexandra_Riera
2005-11-06 23:17:46 sweety pie!! if you start like this, you will be a christmas cake !!! very nice ***** worlda
2005-11-04 01:22:01 LOL!!!! ElSauce
2005-11-03 16:17:54 LOL! mariposasiwapil
2005-11-03 02:17:43 How cute!! It's perfect! Have you noticed how our writtings in english are shorter than the spanish ones? Aniuxa
2005-11-03 00:53:00 wow! maybe "sugar is white" work's :P. My 5 twinkle twinkle litle stars maitencillo
2005-11-02 23:29:41 jajajajaja it's just perfect. ;-) so sweet. jajajaja amayrany
 
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