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Home / Local Writers / BMFY_AlexHans / Fed up - [C:87] 

Another day
Too mad to play
No will to stay
Can't hold my sway
Im in a mood
To scar and kill
Lost in the wood
Of damned and ill
I wanna crash
Wanna destroy
Im gonna dash
For easy joy
I can't go by
Im going down
My will is to fly
Out of this town
If at this moment
I had the power
To bring up torment
Into this world
I wouldnt hesitate
This is my guestimate
I really can't tell

Text added on 23-11-2005, 84 hits. (2 votes)


Readers opinions:
2008-03-07 16:53:06 Wow, really? any meaning to it? beneas
2008-01-08 22:22:49 "Lost in the wood Of damned and ill I wanna crash Wanna destroy"....i think i know just how u felt...i like ur style...it does express how u feel...congrats! ckpreciosa
2005-11-23 17:51:52 I'll have to keep in mind that these were the first five stars I gave in this page with real enthusiasm. Thanks for having sent it. GAIUS
2005-11-23 17:49:58 Very good and very contemporary. Sounds a lot like rap lyrics, and by that I don't mean to belittle it, since I am a rap fan. GAIUS
2005-11-23 02:08:11 wow! I like this "Another day Too mad to play No will to stay Can't hold my sway"... almana
 
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